A couple of weeks back, I did a game jam in the afternoon. It's called Earth Girl and it's a kinetic novel about a finding your way in unfamiliar surroundings. I'd really appreciate it if you could give it a try and give me some feedback!
I've had a couple of nice comments already which is one of the coolest things about game development. It's really awesome when someone enjoys your work.
Any comments or critique are welcome! (Or if you have any technical problems, let me know.)